16 Aralık 2009 Çarşamba

THESIS STATEMENT:ATTENDANCE TO CLASSES IN UNIVERSITIES SHOULDN'T BE OBLIGATION
REASON FOR1:Students who managed to be in university and came to this age are aware of their responsibilities.
REASON FOR 2:Putting obligations like that shows distrust in students.
OPPONENT'S ARGUMENT:Students haven't enough capacity to be successful.So they have to attend classes regularly.
REFUTATION OF OPPONENT'S ARGUMENT:Students in universities are not children they are adults and they are aware of their responsibilities.If they are trusted, believed and set free they will be more successsful.
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  1. Sedat Akayoglu16 Aralık 2009 15:44

    You should modify your thesis statement and make it more detailed. It should include both your views and opponents' views and their reasons.

    Moreover, there is a problem about the opponents' ideas. You wrote "Students haven't enough capacity to be successful.So they have to attend classes regularly." The opponents of your ideas do not think so. They never say anything about the students' capacity. They claim that if teacher let students free, they will most probably prefer not to attend classes. They will choose to spend time in different places. Be careful about it. If you cannot understand your opponents' ideas, you will not be able to refute your opponents' ideas.

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